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I loved the "stopped listening..." bit!

If you don't mind me playing editor:

I think you meant at the end:

You’re going to be her for a while to be

You’re going to be here for a while

I wish I'd notice stuff like that in my own writing as easily I do in others.

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Charles Bastille
Charles Bastille

Written by Charles Bastille

Author of MagicLand & Psalm of Vampires. Join me on my Substack at https://www.ruminato.com/. All stories © 2020-24 by Charles Bastille

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